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Sunday Morning Book Thread - 12-21-2025 ["Perfessor" Squirrel]
Welcome to the prestigious, internationally acclaimed, stately, and illustrious Sunday Morning Book Thread! The place where all readers are welcome, regardless of whatever guilty pleasure we feel like reading (Jesus Christ was born!). Here is where we can discuss, argue, bicker, quibble, consider, debate, confabulate, converse, and jaw about our latest fancy in reading material. As always, pants are required, unless you are wearing these pants...(HT: TheJamesMadison was unavailable for comment)
So relax, find yourself a warm kitty (or warm puppy--I won't judge) to curl up in your lap, sneak a peek at a Christmas present under the tree, and dive into a new book. What are YOU reading this fine morning?
13 And suddenly there was with the angel a multitude of the heavenly host praising God and saying:
14 "Glory to God in the highest,
And on earth peace, goodwill[e] toward men!"
15 So it was, when the angels had gone away from them into heaven, that the shepherds said to one another, "Let us now go to Bethlehem and see this thing that has come to pass, which the Lord has made known to us."
-- Luke 2:13-15 (NKJV)
PIC NOTE
As much as we like to tear AI apart, sometimes it does amazing work. I described the scene as pictured above and Grok really came through for me! Now the real question is when is Musk going to develop his army of robot squirrels to gather nuts for me?
WRITING A BOOK AS A LIPPOGRAM
I had heard of this book, but didn't know much about it until now. Imagine the creative thinking that has to go into writing a 50,000 word novel that doesn't use the letter "e." Not once. That's some serious OCD at work. Not for me. Science fiction authors Stephen Baxter and Frederick Pohl would also struggle with this. Stephen Baxter created the Xeelee Sequence of novels, which chronicle mankind's aeons-long battle against ancient aliens nearly as old as creation itself. Frederick Pohl wrote the Heechee Saga, where mankind discovers alien technology they don't understand but can exploit to expand our horizons and escape an overcrowded, resource-exhausted Earth.
Other authors have taken up the challenge, to varying levels of success, I guess. I suppose now we could simply ask Generative AI to write a story that doesn't use the letter "e." Or any other letter. Or maybe write a story only using the letter "e."
One of our regular commenters is already well on his way:
How long before we csn stsrt going lord of the flies snd stsrt msking pointy sticks. Becsuse I've got s lot of sticks out bsck, msny of them slresdy very pointy.
Posted by: bsnsns Dresm at December 19, 2025 12:58 PM (3uBP9)
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5 SCI-FI CLICHES TO AVOID
Here are the cliches:
Scientific Info Dumps -- A lot of stories are guilty of this when the author is trying to convey information about the world to the reader. When done well, it feels natural, because we are experiencing the information as a character would. When done poorly, one character is telling another character information the second character already knows.
Aliens with Silly Weaknesses -- Unless a story is comedic, writers should avoid this at all costs! Aliens should feel, well, ALIEN, thus if they are antagonists, then the heroes should really struggle to find an alien's Achilles heel. Making them vulnerable to a common substance (like water in Signs) is dumb and makes the aliens look stupid and impotent. Doctor Who is full of examples of this.
Slopppy Time Travel -- Time travel stories are among the most challenging to write if you want to maintain a certain level of consistency in a timeline. The most common "out" is to explain it via multi-verse theory. The problem is that this can also be very difficult to explain to your audience well. It also opens up more plotholes and paradoxes.
Rushed Romance -- I've seen this in a few stories, but it's not confined to just science fiction. Any genre can suffer from this problem if the characters are not well-developed. Including romance subplots means focusing on the characters and their relationships more than focusing on just the science and technology within the story. Not ever author is going to take the time to explore both aspects in sufficient detail to lead to a satisfying outcome. One or the other will suffer as a result.
Tech Ex Machina -- Sometimes this can work, but it can also lead to a rushed and unsatisfying ending because the end result was "too easy." There's nothing wrong with introducing a new technology in a story that resolves plot threads, but the outcome needs to feel as though it's a natural result, rather than a way to fix a plot hole. The Last Jedi movie was quite guilty of this with the "Holdo Maneuver." This new application of technology absolutely WRECKED space travel and warfare in the Star Wars Expanded Universe. Neither Rian Johnson nor J.J. Abrams can write their way out of a paper bag, so J.J.'s dumb explanation for it in The Rise of Skywalker was, "It was a million-to-one shot!" as though he'd just fallen and landed on Fusilli Jerry.
Note that cliches in and of themselves aren't necessarily bad writing. We use cliches for a reason and when they work well, they can make a story entertaining to read or watch on television. The Sherlock Holmes/Agatha Christie style mystery has been done to death by countless authors and television shows, but we still enjoy them.
Of course, as Brandon points out, they can be overused and thus become annoying to the reader/viewer. Or the author simply doesn't know how to use them effectively within the story.
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BOOKS BY MORONS
Sarah A. Hoyt has a new Christmas-themed collection she's just released:
Christmas In Time: A Collection of Short Stories
(Sarah A. Hoyt's Short Story Collections)
From award-winning author Sarah A. Hoyt come six tales of time travel, parallel worlds, and the furthest reaches of space—all bound together by Christmas miracles and the choices that define us.
Meet Time Corps agents who risk madness to prevent reality from splintering. Follow a mathematician pulled into a parallel universe where his twin captains starships between worlds. Watch as mysterious children arrive from impossible futures, and discover Victorian lighthouses that serve as anchors in the storm of time itself. Journey from blood-soaked space stations to asteroid colonies at the edge of the known universe.
This collection includes "What Child Is This," a prequel to Hoyt's acclaimed novel No Man's Land, revealing how a child's accidental time-slip can save a man’s life and create the bonds of family love.
MORON RECOMMENDATIONS
I read Shroud by Adrian Tchaikovsky. I've read a lot of science fiction and I don't know how I missed this author. Shroud is a high-gravity, high-pressure, zero-oxygen moon. It is pitch black, but alive with radio activity. Due to an accident, Juna and Mai are forced to make an emergency landing there in their small, barely adequate vehicle. Unable to contact their ship, they are force to journey across land, sea, and air. Chapters alternate between the human viewpoint and the viewpoint of Shroud's dominate species as they try to understand each other. Fascinating story, interesting characters.
Posted by: Zoltan at December 14, 2025 10:51 AM (VOrDg)
Comment: I almost bought Shroud when I was looking at Adrian Tchaikovsky stories, but decided to go for his Final Architecture series. It sounded interesting, sort of like Pitch Black in some ways. I'm not a huge fan of survival stories, so I decided against it in the end. Maybe if I like The Final Architecture I'll come back and revisit this.
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Started my traditional Christmas books. This week was The Christmas Cantata, one of the Liturgical Mysteries series by Mark Schweizer. An older friend, now gone, got me a signed hardcover edition as a gift. I was already a fan of the series. This one is a mystery but not a murder mystery. It is heartbreakingly poignant at times, includes his trademark humor, and is a story of redemption and acceptance. I fell in love with it on that first reading years ago and look forward to it every season.
Posted by: JTB at December 14, 2025 10:49 AM (yTvNw)
Comment: Since Christmas is just around the corner, I thought it would be nice to highlight Moron-recommended uplifting literature. It's always nice to have a spiritual pick-me-up when I am feeling low. Or when it feels like the world is spiraling into utter chaos. There is always a plan, even when we can't see it. HE can see it, which is good enough for me. I'll simply try to play my role in His grand design.
Both of my bosses were kind enough to give me a couple of gift cards as a small token of appreciation for my work, so I naturally spent them on books. I used one to buy the first book of a series, another to buy the second book, and then went ahead and purchased the third book on my own:
The Final Architecture Book 1 - Shards of Earth by Adrian Tchaikovsky
The Final Architecture Book 2 - Eyes of the Void by Adrian Tchaikovsky
The Final Architecture Book 3 - Lords of Uncreation by Adrian Tchaikovksy
WHAT I'VE BEEN READING THIS PAST WEEK:
Star Trek - The Next Generation - Masks by John Vorholt
Like most Star Trek novels, this is an extended episode. In fact, it reads very much like it might have been a storyline from ST: TNG that was abandoned for some reason. Maybe it was too long. Maybe the showrunners felt they couldn't do it justice. Doesn't matter. I just strapped myself in and enjoyed a pleasant stroll across the world of Lorca as seen through the eyes of the crew of the USS Enterprise-D
Storywise, two hundred years ago (give or take), an Earth colony ship carrying a troupe of minstrel performers crashlanded on Lorca. The tectonic instability and other environmental factors destroyed much of their technology, so the survivors cobbled together a quasi-medieval society with a highly-stratisfied caste system based on masks. Everyone wears a mask all the time and your mask identifies your role in society. You can challenge others for their mask via duels as a way to advance in society. Otherwise, you are stuck as a peasant mask. Naturally, the higher the rank, the more elaborate the mask. The most valuable and important mask is the Wisdom Mask. Whomever wears that has earned the right to be the leader of all Lorcan society.
Against this background, the crew of the Enterprise are bringing a Federation ambassador to welcome the Lorcans back into Federation society after being rediscovered recently. Oddly, the Prime Directive is in effect because they are now a pre-warp civilization, even though they had warp-drive technology in the past. The Federation ambassador has his own agenda for Lorcan society. The Ferengi also get involved because they've been exploiting the Lorcans for their masks, which they can sell for profit on the black market.
As I mentioned, it's really just an extended episode of Star Trek: The Next Generation. There's even a mid-episode cliffhanger when Captain Picard is presumed dead (minor spoiler: he isn't).
Eternity's End by Jeffrey A. Carver
I picked this up at my most recent public library book sale. It's the story of a man who escapes a pirate fortress in space, only to be recruited for a top-secret mission by an alien race to find out what those rascally pirates are really up to. I think Carver was influenced by both Cordwainer Smith and Frank Herbert. His description of space travel through the dangerous, chaotic Flux sounds exactly like something Smith or Herbert would write. Legroeder, the main protagonist, belonged to the Rigger Guild before he was abandoned by them for reasons he's still trying to understand. "Rigging" is some sort of psychic ability to navigate the pathways through the Flux (hyperspace). The Flux has dep layers to it that are extremely hazardous to space travel, but may also hold many secrets. Carver has decent world-building skills here. Legroeder is an "everyman" who has been given some training, but nevertheless serves as the audience surrogate for this strange universe. There's also a fair amount of political intrigue. A starliner was lost in the Flux over a hundred years ago. From time to time, people report seeing it again. However, the Centrist worlds are bound and determined to squash any information about it, and will go to any lengths to prevent Legroeder from divulging information about the lost ship or even seeking more answers. They even framed him for murder to try and shut him up (when they weren't trying to assassinate him outright.)